This week’s photo prompt is provided by Iain Kelly. Thank you, Iain!
At the first sound of the helicopter, Carl put his pen down in annoyance. “That would be the cops again chasing some freaking car. Don’t they know how distracting it is having a low-flying helicopter swooping around the office?”
Over the past few days, he had become increasingly frustrated by the constant permanent presence of the police helicopter. “Some of us are trying to work.”
Derek glanced out of the window. “I don’t think that’s a police helicopter, mate.”
Carl got out of his chair to walk towards the window and look outside. “It isn’t even an air ambulance. What is helicopter doing flying in this part of town?” He snatched up the phone to ring the police and complain.
“I think it’s… Shit!”
The helicopter hit the building and instantly exploded into flames. It seemed like the police had not been able to prevent the latest terrorist attack from happening.
Written for flash fiction for aspiring writers
All too scary a thought these days, Angie – an ever present threat. Nicely told, the tension built well. 🙂
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I am glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Sadly realistic. Great twist at the end – although horrifying. Wonderful story, Angie!
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I think we are all on our toes at the moment. Thanks for reading and hosting.
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Yes we are! 🙂
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Terrifying tale. I guess you can never tell when it will happen next, or where. Well written.
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Nobody would know where when or even how. Thanks for reading.
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Oh that is scary, in how realistic of a scenario it is nowadays. Gave me shivers. Great writing, Angie.
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If it gave you shivers then I am doing my job 🙂 Thanks for reading.
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Or … it was a police response. ( Not really, I am an ex-cop. Just noting the overall negativity out there.)
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If it was, they mucked up and hit the building themselves! I am sure they prevent quite a day every day, there are just some motor always going to sit through the net. Thanks for reading.
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A good few every day* and slip through*
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That would be a terrible way to have a terrorist attack. Great writing Angie.
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It would be awful! Thanks for reading.
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In the past people worried about land disputes and unfriendly neighbors, now the savage desire to rule the world has returned except this time it’s come along with pure lunacy.
Great tale depicting the times we live in.
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Yep, real nutters out there. Thanks for reading.
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🙂
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I agree with everyone. This is terrible, scary, and most of all, realistic. Not many of us want to think about that, but it’s true. Great writing and topic to take on with this prompt.
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Hopefully it will remain fiction. Thanks for reading.
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Hear, hear
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Reality written in few words, always looming large over our heads… hmmm… Good writing!
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Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it!
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just when we think it could never happen in our neighborhood or locality, an ever present danger and you built the story up really nicely
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Well this really makes me want to go to some high rise tomorrow! 😦 Scary good writing.
Ellespeth
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