This is my entry into this week’s flash fiction for aspiring authors.
In this challenge you are given a photo and asked to write a piece of fiction between 100 and 150 words inspired by it.
This week’s picture has been provided by TJ Paris, thank you very much for doing it 🙂 the image can be seen below:
My story is exactly 100 words this week!
– –
Dylan bounded up to me with the bright smile his face. “I got you these!”
“I hope you did not pick them out of somebody else’s garden, like last time, remember? We got in all kinds of trouble for that.”
He shook his blonde curls, and grinned at me. “I got them from that field.” As he pointed towards the space we both noticed a movement within the flowers. “Ew! Bug!”
“It is not a bug, but a butterfly. No! Dylan, don’t you dare squish…”
Sadly I was too late to save the butterfly from the hands of my nephew.
Haha! Well, that’s the end of that! Cute story! Too bad for the butterfly with Dylan around. LOL! Great story Angie!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very complete story and it flowed really well. Realistic about kids as well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Enjoyed….. Dylan needs a ‘bug’ appreciation class?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lol, yeah he sure does! Thanks for reading.
LikeLiked by 1 person
YES! A bug life appreciation class. I went from smiling to laughing to gasping in horror. Come here, little nephew, let me squish you! 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha, glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading.
LikeLiked by 1 person
😦
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah, sorry! Thanks for reading and commenting.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m a “happy ending” kind of person…but then life steps in. 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good story with the death of the butterfly. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great story, but I felt sorry for the poor butterfly. I doubt it had a chance to feel anything though…hopefully.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I doubt it had a chance to feel anything. Thanks for reading.
LikeLike