This is my first ever attempt at Mondays finish the story. In this challenge you are asked to write a piece of flash fiction of between 100 and 150 words that go with the picture.
The picture we were given was this:
and the first line that the story was: “Now, this is the life of Riley.”
This is my story:
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“Now, this is living the life of Riley.”
Ruffle stretched lazily along her blue pillow when she heard the words. It was a gift to symbolise the fact that the heating had been turned on.
Ruffle really enjoyed this time of year, because there was usually a fire lit during those long cold evenings. The ones where the weather seemed to bash at the windows. This usually meant that she was not put outside, but instead her litter tray was brought in.
All she needed now, was for her human to put food right here so she didn’t have to move.
Now, that would be living the life of Riley.
First attempt, a success! 🙂 I like it, captures the feeling of fall… I assume. (We are still in the mid 90s in Vegas, and I was swimming as late as last night.)
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Thank you for reading and saying that 🙂 yes, it is definitely the feeling of fall over here… But, you know, rub it in if you’d like you Vegas person!!!
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Sorry! I wasn’t rubbing it in. At least, I didn’t mean to. For example, I’ve never seen seasons, the fall colors and snowfall, lightning bugs and fog… they’re all myths to me. I don’t know what it’s like to leave windows open and let cool, fresh air in because by the time our days are cool enough for it, our nights are frigid with 40 degree temperature swings. I’ll never be able to put a freshly carved pumpkin out more than two days before trick-or-treaters because it would wither from the heat. My yard consists of rocks because grass doesn’t do well and water restrictions make it impossible. What plants are there look like dead twigs during the summer heat (half of the year). .. I could go on forever. Trust me. You’re one of lucky ones.
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I went over to Las Vegas in September last year, so I know exactly what kind of heat you are talking about. However, it is not exactly cool air that you would be getting into your window, it is absolutely freezing cold air! It is a very different kind of cold to what they get in say, Russia, because it is not a dry cold, like you have a dry heat in Vegas. Life here has its disadvantages, just the same as yours probably does… And pretty much everywhere else. Let’s just face it, life downright sucks!
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Great story, cats really do live the life of Riley, I know mine does.
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My two certainly do as well 🙂 Thanks for reading.
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Ah perfect life
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I need a human to bring me some food too 🙂 Cute story!
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Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it!
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Cute story Angie written from the cat’s POV. If she is like my cat was then it won’t be long and she will have her human wrapped around her little paw and get the food bowl closer. Haha!
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LOL, and my pair would have me doing just that! Thanks for reading.
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LOL! That’s cats for you. 😀
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Great story! It certainly seems accurate to how cats think.
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I loved your imagery of the weather bashing at the window. Enjoyed your story. Welcome to the challenge hope to see your writings again.
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Great story! First time? Difficult to believe! I too love the overall autumnal feeling.
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This is wonderful! You should continue to write for flash fiction! 🙂
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I will keep trying to do it! Thanks for reading.
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That would make it the life of Riley indeed! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. I appreciate your contribution. Be well… ^..^
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Enjoyed doing it 😀 thanks for reading.
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Looking forward reading more soon!
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Hey, I have nominated your blog for the One Lovely Blog Award. You can follow this link for the nomination post: https://ailamathicurry.wordpress.com/2015/10/13/blogger-award-blogger-award/ Good luck for this and your writing career. Keep writing Angie 🙂
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That sounds just like a cat! A great story ! Very enjoyable.
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😀 thanks for reading!
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